[WIP]Heras for source.

[Kh]

Yop all,i ll post here some picture about my work on heras.
Some of you have idea to make this map greatest???

I have already make the spawn zone boxes,but i get some problemes with the texturing (not enough time to make good texturing atm).This is why i can't show you a thing.


My progress atm:


http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras9.JPG

 

[Kh]

GImme your opinions

 

[ceriux]

im not trying to be mean by any means lol... but you might want to work on your skill as a mapper... expecially for source, you work is very blocky and un natural looking.

 

[Kh]

haha,it's far to be finish,it's just the "structure"

In "Work In Progress",there is PROGRESS,then,this is not the final thing,i am working on.I show my PROGRESS.
Then please,do constructive.

 

[J-M v2.5.5]

Here's constructive criticism:
1) The map structure/bones/base should be built using NODRAW.
2) Actual textures should be on displacement maps, not on the map structure/bones/base.
3) Don't post screenshots like these, because seriously... you can't imagine what this thread could turn into.

 

[Kh]

hmmmm,i just made some fast texture to see my progress,all the map is in nodraw but...i got probleme with the water.
the water is invisible...

 

[evilsquirrel]

part of your water brush is likely outside the map, box it in or cut it down

 

[WeissberV]

hmmmm,i just made some fast texture to see my progress,all the map is in nodraw but...i got probleme with the water.
the water is invisible...

Leak.

 

[Kh]

yes it was weissber,then

My progress atm:

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras1.JPG
http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras2.JPG
http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras3.JPG

 

[ceriux]

looks much better... image 2 looks a little square still but much better.

 

[coleSlaw]

I like. Keep working.
For the second image, you should the the edge of the ceiling differnt. Instead of a 90 degree angle, you should try and make it curve if you get what I'm saying.

 

[Kh]

last image before sleeping...
A texture doesnt work,the cliff texture i wanted.

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Ma ... heras4.JPG

to coleslow:i have been fix it,thanks for advice.(this is not really curve,but it's a bit better.i did my possible)

 

[WeissberV]

Remmember my PM on lighting. can send it to me if you want.

 

[Kh]

what's bad with lighting?

 

[WeissberV]

With your lighting, everything. The light is on the wall but not the floor and the floor is like completely black.

 

[coleSlaw]

Looks goods!

 

[Jelly]

I like. Keep working.
For the second image, you should the the edge of the ceiling differnt. Instead of a 90 degree angle, you should try and make it curve if you get what I'm saying.

Gaz isn't here, so I'm gonna say what he would have said. LIGHT SOURCES. You can't just make a light, and not have it come from anything. Maybe you could make a glowy mushroom or something, that could emit the light? Looks great, besides that.

 

[Kh]

k,i have worked on the map (sorry weiber,ur light was not what i imagined for the map.Then,your bridge is good .

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras5.JPG

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras6.JPG

 

[WeissberV]

k,i have worked on the map (sorry weiber,ur light was not what i imagined for the map.Then,your bridge is good .

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras5.JPG

http://khelben1.free.fr/root/Mapping/Masterwordsource/heras/heras6.JPG

lol... the bridge was done in like 2 seconds, in my oppinion it was rushed, if u send it me again i can make a better one.

 

[villager]

I actually liked that bridge :S

 

[Crow]

It's crazy thin, doesn't look real. At least... I don't know anyone that cuts thier wood like that. >_>

 

[Sabre]

I like the bridge...But it needs something:
-Try making it look more 'natural;' it has an asymmetrical shape, but it has a texture that looks like stuff that was built. You might try adding more supports at jaunted angles, perhaps...But hey, it's progress, and I love progress

 

[Kh]

bridge isn't really important
i was thinking some modeler ll make one good later (if modeler exist for sur)

 

[villager]

Maybe if you make the wooden supports look less clean cut? oO

 

[Kh]

to weissber:make a prefab and send me it if you want.
At this moment am doing the rest of the map,a bridge isn't that important.