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Once apon a time in Daragoth there was a tribe of orcs they liked to kill things and so they built an arena. One day a hero by the name of pimpsta!1!111!1(1) found this arena and decided to steal the golden skull of Ku'yuagashunga that happened to be in the middle of the arena.

Now the orcs were lead by a vial troll nammed "Hidious cave troll" and he liked shiney things so he was not happy when Pimpsta!1!1!1!1(1) tried to take his skull so he ordered his tribe to attack him.

After 3 waves of orcs were dead at Pimpsta!1!11!11(1)'s feet, the doors to teh area jammed shut. Pimpsta1!11111!1!!(1) starved to death

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Always have to be careful of those Vial Trolls.

I'm considering getting rid of this, as it seems like you're just toying with me =|

Anyway.. You need more character development, grammar and spelling need a lot of work, and you could really do with a good story board.
 

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Ok, I'm just locking this thread. No moar flames -.-
 
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